Trinity Drake
12/08/2021
Rational Argument


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      I am so excited to be sharing with you a few trials and errors I notice while writing my 5-7 page paper on climate change. The problematic issue for my papers was that there are people in the
world whom really deny the existence of climate change. I begin it by informing the audience that if we fail to
protect nature then we fail to protect our selves. By stating this it pulls the reader in wanting to know more about the topic im
discussing which is climate change. I made sure that each section had a smooth transition.My thesis definitely had tension behind it considering climate change effects me and my loved ones. The existence of climate change is arguable considering it leans towards both factual and opinionated reasoning.
I made sure that I provided solid title, year, genre, author and publication in each section of the rational argument essay I written on climate change. Signal phrases is something I made sure to have into my paper also. I will provide a link above along with a few images of what helped me have a better understanding of climate change. It brings forth a more broader expect of the importance on it .For example. Fossil fuels being the  main cause of warming of the earth. 

     The main details is supported by the supporting details and everything is aligned with one another.
The biographical information is work cited properly considering I have been to the writing center multiple
times making sure my paper is striving to get the message across that climate
change do exist and people need to be educated on it more so that the world can become a better place.I definitely wrote my essay with pathos and egos formatting considering I provided information to the view that are factual and speaking with a since of vulnerability to my audience throughout the paper.The sand-which outline is useful when structuring my paper. It gave me a broader picture on how I would like to format my paper when it came to reasoning.  The essay flows well from the introduction of the essay ; with the proper transition words. The closing of the paper provided a clear thesis. 
Furthermore, I summarized sources sufficiently while bringing forth important details and creating a balance of the argument. The reader can have a better understanding of my point of view on climate change and as to why I say that it exist.

Ps: I had major problems trying to get the pictures uplpoaded to my blogs so I copy and pasted the address link to them above. I pray you have a understanding of my situation and not penalize me for it. Please and thank you.
 



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  1. dr. kyburzDecember 17, 2021 at 12:58 PM

    It was delightful to see you respond so powerfully to the film. Your passion comes through!

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