Trinity Drake

Dr.Kyburz

English 105

September,28,2021

     Today I attended my appointment in the writing center at 4:00 pm -5:00pm with Zachary he  offers a couple of suggestions that i can add to make my Coral reef matters essay more agreeable.  when i first bough forth my 4-6 page essay concerning corals there were information scatters about. Things seem to be unorganized and it was just UN acceptable . Attending my writing center appoint with Zachary definitely help me in the long run.  I would highly recommend attending the witting center to have a profession reread your work to make the paper more agreeable. There are tips and tricks these tutors will bring more awareness to so can be views as a useful source. That can be as simple as citing a paper. Take my word for it .I am currently making the changes for that now and is making another appointment but this time with Lindsey in the writing center so that i can make sure this is the perfect essay and  I am  excited about it .  

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